The seashell

I found a seashell in the car today;
it rolled into her deserted footwell
as I turned into our old parking bay;

it lay, with all the stories it could tell.

We gathered it, together, on some beach
the girl and I, amidst the water, wine,
hypothesis of things beyond our reach;

when was that? Oh, the summer 69,
I think, it’s hard to tell, these autumn days.

Would it still proclaim her lost siren’s call
if held to ear? Or, echo sea’s malaise,
lashing waves, the inevitable squall?

The shell, it sits, its inner pinkness lures
me still; though it is long devoid of soul,
it brings a recollection that endures;
A summer beach, her face, a happy stroll.

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Date: 7/18/2024 9:55:00 AM
Beautifully written Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/19/2024 1:30:00 AM
Thank you David I appreciate your kind comment
Date: 7/8/2024 12:12:00 PM
Dear Terry, congratulations on your win in Craig's contest with your pensive, thought provoking, memory provoking gem. I love the last stanzas with the memories of the shell and the wishes of young love. Blessings to you!
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/11/2024 8:47:00 AM
Thank you Sam
Date: 7/7/2024 6:17:00 PM
Dear Terry, I adore this poignant gem. It's soulful and hauntingly beautiful. The symbolism of the shell; of a past relationship and the joy of a certain summer day "the girl and I, amidst the water, wine" is expressed with vivid imagery. The melancholy that the shell also evokes about the "summer 69" is palpable. A deep, nostalgic, emotional piece. Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/11/2024 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Susan for your generous and kind comments, warm wishes back to you.
Date: 7/6/2024 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/11/2024 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 7/5/2024 6:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Happy writing.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/6/2024 1:51:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 7/5/2024 12:08:00 PM
Yes, the echoes of ourselves cannot be forgotten
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/6/2024 1:52:00 AM
Thank you Craig
Date: 6/15/2024 4:11:00 PM
Such a lovely poem of reflection Terry….the last line ties it together perfectly! Loved this…Debx
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/1/2024 1:53:00 AM
Thank you Deb
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