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The Rendezvous

Cold and running out of light, a winter's afternoon seems to gather the last few things to put on view - clouds hurrying across the sky with shapes that suggest a face or a butterfly and hanging just above the rooftops, the pale outline of a daylight moon. And the mood of a late afternoon settles here too in the long shadows cast by words across a page through which the mind passes, seeking out something to attach to, the glow of its own moon, a flickering memory looking for a breath and ahead, lodged somewhere in the coming dark, a small, indistinct blur, closing in towards a rendezvous.

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Date: 7/19/2024 10:56:00 AM
A tryst with the moon... I've often written of that very thing. How delightful that would be. I always find a daylight moon intriguing, but needs telling, "Wait your turn for the sun is not yet ready to slumber.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2024 2:45:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for such a lovely compliment, Paul but your poetry never bows to another.
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/21/2024 2:42:00 AM
We share a common love for that mysterious and gentle celestial companion...although I think you've almost made it your own in many of your splendid poems. I will pick up the crumbs dear friend...many thanks for giving my daylight moon a viewing. Valued.

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