The Reluctant Bride

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The Reluctant Bride, by Suzette Richards – image generated 21/1/2025

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She is getting married today, my childhood sweetheart. I catch her eye and in that instance her sensual lips curl in a half-smile. I would like to think that it contains a message – even an apology – as I am not the groom. Her chocolate brown eyes hold a challenge as the church minister asks whether there are any objections to this proposed union. For a fleeting moment I am tempted to unmask the churly fellow for the unsuitable match he is, but content myself with taking the photograph surreptitiously with my iPhone. It is fitting that the picture isn’t perfect.

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/26/2025 12:30:00 AM

Yes, pain we hide, problem-solve ways to move on, many of us (speaking for myself) know this feeling, good work Suzette!

Suzette Richards
Date: 1/26/2025 12:54:00 AM

Thank you for your thoughts, James, and your kind comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/22/2025 5:33:00 AM

Funny how we can analyze a moment, seeing it from our perspective. We can’t hide our feelings. They are there. This former sweetheart, doesn’t step forward to ruin the day, but imagines the bride unhappily after. Hugs

Suzette Richards
Date: 1/22/2025 5:42:00 AM

I didn't think of it that way, Kim, but you are right. An unrequited love can wreak havoc with our emotions. The hint is in the title - the cropped photo is all he has left of the memory of that day. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. :)