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Notes About The Poem

The central idea of this poem is self-forgiveness and personal growth through challenging times. It explores how life's trials and hardships can lead to a deeper understanding of oneself and the capacity to rebuild from broken or weathered parts of one's story. The poem uses imagery of rain and erosion to symbolize the cleansing process that can reveal a hidden source of inner peace and renewal, highlighting the transformative power of self-acceptance and resilience.

The Rain of Self-Forgiveness

Under the storm clouds  
the rain starts to  
wash away

Creating streams  
that carve through earth  
and broken stone.

Sometimes everything  
has to be  
eroded and  
worn away

so you can find  
the solid ground  
that was there  
all along.

Sometimes it takes  
a heavy downpour  
to reveal that  

small, clear  
and steady  
spring of peace  
within your heart.

Sometimes with  
the splintered remains  
of the old bridge  
you've crossed before,

someone has crafted  
something new  
from the weathered wood  
of your own story.

You are not drowning  
you are learning to swim.

growthfree verse

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Sherry Beck

Date: 7/18/2024 5:16:00 PM

Don, your writing resonates with truth. To truly become who we were created to be, we must delve into the roots of our issues. Without addressing what ails us, we’re merely swaying in the wind.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 7/13/2024 10:08:00 AM

"You are not drowning, you are learning to swim." Thank you, Don. Your "Rain of Self-Forgiveness" is beautifully written in verse of humble reminders. Great poetic piece.

Sherry Beck
Date: 7/18/2024 5:18:00 PM

Indeed, at times, immersing ourselves in the depths of trials reveals our innate strength.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/9/2024 10:46:00 AM

Hello Don Iannone, wow! A great poem. I i love the rain. I enjoyed this poem.Ii will mak3 it my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/10/2024 10:49:00 AM

Hello don Iannone, You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Don Iannone
Date: 7/9/2024 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Much appreciated! Don

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/23/2024 12:39:00 PM

Your poetry eloquently portrays the strength that comes from overcoming hardship and the ability of the human soul to persevere, Don. By use of stirring visuals and an optimistic message, it delves into topics like rebirth, spiritual fortitude, and the path to achieving peacefulness.

Don Iannone
Date: 4/25/2024 4:59:00 AM

Thank Sotto. Your words are so true about strength from facing our hardships in life. Don

Silent One

Date: 4/23/2024 11:45:00 AM

I like how your poem beautifully captures the transformative power of adversity and the resilience of the human spirit. Through evocative imagery and a message of hope and how it explores themes of renewal, inner strength, and the journey toward finding peace amidst life's challenges.

Don Iannone
Date: 4/25/2024 4:58:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One. I appreciate your comments. Don