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The Passenger

Passenger of past lives, paint thy cloth, a lively hue, of journeys prior, when our skies were new, wild, and virginal, above bucolic land, before her windflowers were scattered, and the fields were toiled by hand.

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Date: 5/25/2024 12:59:00 AM
Such beautiful poetry, loved this.
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/25/2024 2:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Arthur
Date: 5/24/2024 6:49:00 PM
I enjoy this deep poem of various times and lives. Well done.
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/25/2024 2:27:00 AM
Thanks Hilda, glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: 5/24/2024 8:15:00 AM
Kate, your poem is truly remarkable. The way you skillfully craft imagery takes me on a journey through time and space, stirring feelings of nostalgia and wonder as I am transported to past landscapes and journeys.
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/25/2024 2:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, your feedback is really appreciated :)
Date: 5/24/2024 6:19:00 AM
Dear Kate, Wow, truly enchanting, weaving the imagery that transported me through time and space. The wonderful depiction of past journeys and landscapes evokes a sense of nostalgia and wonder. Your words truly create a picture of a bygone era, filled with untamed beauty and innocence. A very captivating piece. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/25/2024 2:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel, such kind feedback:)

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