The Old Chair

Hanging from the old oak tree
on the old wooden swing I swayed
like a bird who is free no rules to obey
just a young child at play

Going so close to the ground rising up to the sky
soaring high in the air seeing everything nearby
on this old wooden chair
with plenty of time to spare

With each moving sway my long brown hair wraps around my neck
every now and then giving my nose a gentle slap
on this old wooden chair
the full feeling of the wind as it flows

Oh how I wish I could go back to those years 
to just disappear for even only a moment
to the old wooden chair
and to be so young and unaware. 

T Reams   3/25/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/27/2015 3:56:00 PM
Tammy, oh to be that little girl again to swing on a swing again, reliving those memories, thank you . A 7 and good luck in the contest Eve
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Tammy Reams
Date: 3/27/2015 7:46:00 PM
Thank you for the very nice comment! It would be great no worries just pure freedom. Again Thank you Eve
Date: 3/25/2015 4:01:00 PM
Excellent pen Tammy! I love the picture you've word painted in this reminiscing sweet piece, dear friend. I enjoyed the innocence element of childhood and playfulness that you brought into this write! A 7 from me! Thank you for sharing! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) Love n' hugs! xxx D."
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Date: 3/25/2015 4:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for the fantastic comment! Hugs and God bless you too!
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