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The Observer

Fulfillment is his game; he cannot name another choice that would enhance a life so lost in love of all that he surveys. The beloved too will fail, for he must lose the trail, in his indifferent quest to understand-- I for one, would welcome it, for coming to the close of fantasy and life, I'd sing not requiem, but celebration. Enhancement finally takes place with a shoulder's shrug. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/17/2014 12:49:00 AM
I really love this piece...great work
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Robert Ludden
Date: 4/17/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thanks, Debbie. I don't know if I do, or not. It was a kind of experimental thing, that unfolded far from my original intent. Don't know quite what to make of it, myself.

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