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The Nature Of Love

If I am breath then why do I fear the nature of my birth If I am love then why do I wait to spread it gently on those who need it most and look just like me... If I am light then why do the stars explode in the sky ? . Why, why, why, do I need the moon to light my path? If I am God's child then how can I make a difference? Look around you brother, sister, don't you see that you are just like me ? You are breath, you are love, you are a special child and you were born to make a difference in this transient world. Don't hide your light dear soul, go ahead and be the brave warrior that I know you are and remember, you are breath, and you are Love...

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Date: 9/19/2024 8:14:00 PM
I love how your lyric flows very nicely!
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Date: 9/19/2024 8:13:00 AM
Dear Rose, So many great questions and encouragement that we are all family. I love this verse: "You are breath, you are love, you are a special child and you were born to make a difference in this transient world." Yes, we need to try to make a positive impact on our lives and the world. Excellent use of Ink! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/18/2024 10:37:00 PM
wonderful Rose, i love the questionings here and the demonstration of love, a touching work, thanks
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Date: 9/19/2024 3:40:00 AM
So good to hear from you again Yann, sending love and heart ties,:)
Date: 9/18/2024 10:35:00 AM
The way youv questioned throughout this poem really stood out for me dear rose! I love the flow and lyrical touch of this’ I especially love the line “ remember, you are breath, and you are Love...” awwn thank you that touched my soul and heart so very poetically! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/18/2024 2:43:00 PM
Love the nature of your appreciation and you love :)
Date: 9/18/2024 7:33:00 AM
Absolutely! Well said. "do not hide ones light under a bushel." All we need do, is shine.
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Date: 9/18/2024 2:45:00 PM
That light is so dearly needed Joe, we can't afford to hide it no, thanks for reading , :)
Date: 9/18/2024 5:37:00 AM
Irresistible poetry mystic rose. I don't think you have a mean bone in your body. There are many who could learn from you about the need to be kind and gracious
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Date: 9/18/2024 2:45:00 PM
Oh Tom, I'm only human like the rest, feeling every emotion on earth, right now grieving my sister in law makes me sad and angry that she died so young. Only 68, guess God needed her for His love garden, still, we will miss her, thank you for such a profound comment. It means so much.

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