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The Mountain Top

I climbed to the top of the mountain Overlooking majestic snowy peaks How refreshing to see the clouds below I am on the door step to the heavens Or so it seems All for saying kind words Its so easy it feels like a magical dream That a smile and a kind word Is returned one thousand fold I say to fanatics and those so sure Of what is right and good. or evil and wrong Climb with me to the mountaintop Breathe in the joy of being King for a day. You may conquer them with your armies or terror, this is true However, from way up high, as you gaze both below and up to the heavens Would you not rather conquer their hearts?

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Casarah Nance

Date: 5/10/2014 8:56:00 PM

Oh wonderful. I agree. Nice is nice man. Seriously I don't understand why people are mean, isn't it a heck of a lot easier to smile. Well so let me conquer you with my smile :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/10/2014 11:30:00 PM

I am never mean, if you always feed me on time!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/27/2014 4:55:00 PM

sounds magical Arthur lovely pen hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/10/2014 11:29:00 PM

Thanks so much my Shadow!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/27/2014 12:09:00 PM

Conquering the heart is better than anything else...:) I like how you build up the prose then say at the climax lool you opted for a question :D! Two thumbs up..:), olive eloisa here..:)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/10/2014 11:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Olive, my heart was conquered, defeated, slain and torn to pieces and killed, so now I just write!

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/26/2014 12:41:00 PM

Bravo arthur! beautiful (perfect!) ending my good Muse!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/25/2014 2:25:00 PM

Arthur - if I was not the way I am, I would climb that mountain. I did climbed a mountain once. I was 15 years old. Something, I will never forget... Lucilla

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/10/2014 11:27:00 PM

We can always climb mountains, even if its just in our minds!!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/22/2014 7:07:00 PM

...love conquers all" does it not? I always say kill them with kindness rather than the same ugliness they spread....I like this one, glad I stopped by to read it tonight :) thanks for the comments on my poems! Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 8:29:00 PM

and I thank you you for your kindness and kind remarks!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/22/2014 7:51:00 AM

The kind words are only of value if they are sincere. For some they are meant to elevate them and allow them to be admired at the top of the mountain. It adds to the illusion of greatness and fails to build lasting community. Maybe I got it wrong but that is my take on the poem.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 8:39:00 PM

cont.... kind support I have received , but I will certainly try my best!!!!! Cheers

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 8:37:00 PM

Hi Richard, and I agree completely!!! and as I said I was being a wee bit tongue and cheek,Easter week end was the first in a long time I had free, and I have to tell you, it was such a pleasure to have the time to read so many of peoples works here, and yet still I know its the tip of the iceberg!!! I might add how great it has been to meet so many lovely people here!!! I hope to have more time down the road, I have felt bad at times not being able to give back to people, all the kind

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 4/22/2014 7:46:00 AM

We are at the top of the mountain everyday, Arthur! :) Love your write!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 8:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Toguyen!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/22/2014 3:40:00 AM

Guess? What do you want us to guess? I'm a little confused. The poem was absolutely trilling. I love the message there....Please...expound on the footnote. Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 8:41:00 PM

Thank you for your always kind words and that beautiful smile you have!

Karen Murphy

Date: 4/21/2014 10:01:00 PM

Hi Arthur !! Good stuff. I enjoyed it.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 8:41:00 PM

Much appreciated Karen!!!