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The Motel Goodrest

With plates and words in anger flying My wife and I now deem it best To cease all our screaming and crying As I check into the Motel Goodrest I arrive and plop down for a blissful night But for two hours a car’s engine revs; varoom! Above me screeching shouts; a lover’s fight And the loud thumping of the bed in the next room A frantic eeeouu; a cayote cat snack? Now the zzz-zzz of a neon sign on the blink If I had any brains I’d start to pack! But I sigh aaah; into slumber I sink Sun shines through the drapes and onto the wall There’s splish-splashing in the motel pool It was a calm, restful night after all Yipee! Now everything’s cool! I hear a loud clomp-clomp; what now? There’s a moo so low and mournful Through the window peers the eyes of a cow Looking a bit weary and scornful I pack and flee as if for my life Passing the cow whose bell clangs and claps I check out and meekly return to my wife And spend the weekend taking naps 7/22/22 Written in Onomatopoeia

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Date: 7/29/2022 1:25:00 PM
Loved the humor, Robert. We all need a little light poetry from time to time. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 7/24/2022 10:40:00 PM
The humor and rhyme at its very best Robert completely enjoyed my friend...
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2022 3:00:00 PM
Whenever I can put a smile on a face, my mission has been accomplished and my day bright! Thank you, Robert
Date: 7/24/2022 1:50:00 PM
I'm faving it! Clever beyond words, it's a SMASH, pure dynamite POW! Good luck in Robert, in this ROARING contest! ~Anaya
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2022 3:01:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya for your fave! I'm very appreciative. Robert
Date: 7/23/2022 8:30:00 PM
As cute and clever as can be, Robert. Thoroughly enjoyable! Thanks, gw
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/24/2022 11:08:00 AM
We'll keep the light on for ya!
Date: 7/22/2022 5:10:00 PM
Boy, I'd say it would have been less noisy at home! Perhaps; perhaps not. Well, at least you wouldn't have had the splish-splashing in the motel pool, I suppose embellished with cries of "Marco Polo!"
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/23/2022 1:45:00 PM
As a kid I used to love to stay in one, especially when we went across the country to New York. Things were different!
Date: 7/22/2022 4:08:00 PM
Your imagery definitely depicts the horrors of a motel…..very funny and good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/23/2022 1:43:00 PM
Motels sure can be entertaining, glad you enjoyed Paulette! Thank you, Robert

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