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The Ludicrous Love

Have u ever been in love? makes u vulnerable, like the kites above. open ur chest and opens up ur heart, allowing to mess up, in ways absurd. U build up all defenses, u build up a suit of armor, To no use it is, it creeps like a burgular. The stupid u, the stupid one wanders into ur stupid world, And u give them a piece of u, for which they never asked. And then one day something stupid happens, A kiss, a touch, a smile, renders u hapless. And then ur life is not yours anymore, confusion, dillema, sleeplessness outpour. And then she sends 'may be we should b friends' leaves u sulking, bemoaning' and everything ends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/25/2010 10:21:00 PM
nicely written amit, the first experience of love at a tender age. Good Work. Cheers Oscar
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Date: 5/25/2010 3:21:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:09:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amit. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2010 2:47:00 AM
Very sad poem. but well penned
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