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The Lonely House

Across the dark street I ponder a lonely house I hear it sobbing

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Randy Freie
Date: 4/21/2024 12:08:00 PM
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Hi Darlene, what a sad haiku. I used to live in that house years ago. Lucky for me, I got evicted. Lol
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2024 10:32:00 AM
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Hello Randy Freie, LoL I saw this lonely house all by itself. it was dilapidated looked like it was ready to fall to the ground. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene./
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Gordon Wickstrom
Date: 1/8/2017 8:28:00 PM
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Even the moon saddens when evening rests there-very nice writing--thank for your comment on my writing-Gord
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/11/2017 6:24:00 PM
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Your welcome Gord, I enjoyed writing this poem. I actually thought the lonely hous was speaking to me. I do enjoy your poems.
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 9/5/2016 1:08:00 PM
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Wonderful, you are very good at this form of poetry. Look forward to reading many more.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/6/2016 9:46:00 AM
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Thank you Seosamh That house that was across from me was lonely for a very long tim, before someone bought the house.
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Augustus Black
Date: 9/2/2016 10:35:00 PM
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A house that has a very sad history or sad present. Nicely crafted....
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/1/2016 8:33:00 PM
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Yes the house had a sad history.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/2/2016 5:41:00 PM
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Fantastic haiku, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/1/2016 8:32:00 PM
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Thank you Daniel. How do I write a List poem? Thank you.

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