The Little Pine Tree's Wish

Not too long ago, in a forest so dense,
a pine tree shot up from a seedling that fell
between bigger ones that prevented the sun
from helping it grow, and it felt so alone.

If only I could have sprung up on a lawn
where sunshine and rain can help me become tall.
Where I can be seen as a special pine tree
with flowers around me, how happy I'd be.

Now there was a boy, living just down the road,
who had a dear grandma he'd visit that day.
And since Christmas season, it was at the time,
she'd wished for a tree that was pretty, but small.

So grandson went off to the woods and dug up
the little pine tree and he took it right home. 
Into a clay pot, with good soil, planted it
and brought it to grandma to soon decorate.

The little pine tree was as pleased as can be
with shiny red balls and a star at the top.
Inside the bay window, it bathed in the sun
and with enough water, soon felt himself grow.

In time, came the Spring, and another surprise!
The boy brought it out and then planted the tree
on grandma's green lawn with some tulips around
in view of the window where it would be seen.

The little pine tree was so glad it was found...
...to live all its days on the sunny green lawn.

 
February 4, 2019

For Contest, 'A Fairy Tale For Children,'
   sponsored by Eve Roper

Yes, I would have loved to read this story to my
grandchildren.  However, they are grown up now.
I will save it for any 'greats' someday!

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Date: 2/24/2019 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra, for entering my , “A Fairy Tale for Children” contest. There are so many little trees that can be replanted and look wonderful for a yard. The story had great imagery and feeling. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Visit my blog.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:40:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve, for the nice contest and for my placement. I had fun writing it, and I appreciate your nice comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/13/2019 7:02:00 PM
Beautiful story and fairy tale, Susan. Ya know, you can still read it to your kids, even though they are all grown up. We are all still young at heart and love to hear or read fairy-tales. I am living proof (lol) great write and best wishes for a win. Charlie
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/14/2019 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charles, for the supportive comments! Yes, you are correct, we all are still young at heart and enjoy fairytales! I appreciate your visit and best wishes. Sandra :)
Date: 2/8/2019 5:56:00 PM
What a lovely story,Sandra and although it was free verse it still had a swing to it. I enjoyed reading this and it would go down really well with young children.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2019 8:24:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy! I really appreciate your positive and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
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