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So you want to get to know me, you want me in your life. Your friends have said that I'd be good for you, But can you trust their judgement? do you think they know me well? Do they know that I will make demands of you? You see I'm quite demanding, I'll use up all your time. I'll make you spend it with me day and night. And when you want to leave, I'll be tugging at your sleeve, And you know that I will make you stay the night. Do you know that I'm expensive? Do you think you can afford me? I'm not as cheap as ladies in your past. But I always will be there, when you have the time to spare and your love for me will last, and last, and last. So come and spend an evening, See how much you love me. In the morning I can promise you'll be back. I never will divorce you, I'll never let you go, I know you'll never ever be the same. You'll never want to leave me. You just have to believe me. You see this ladies name is .................... (Crack Cocaine) <<< Cal Bamb "The word artist"©riginal >>> " I paint pictures with words " Dedicated to all who have met this Lady. calbambi@gmail.com

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Date: 8/24/2021 6:04:00 PM
Wow! What a surprise at the end! What a hard journey to recovery. Well written, Cal!
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Date: 11/20/2020 4:34:00 PM
What a journey! Loved the build up. Well done <3
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Date: 11/17/2020 9:51:00 PM
This poem has blown me away ...fatal is this attraction . Great creativity , intelligently written . Great poem , Cal and have a wonderful day ..
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Date: 8/3/2019 2:40:00 PM
This blew me away. The set up to that final line was so creatively done. I was drawn in thinking how foolish, conceited and unrealistic this woman is - what a dumb story of attraction by dumb thinking humans, then WHAM! All I got right about dumb was drugs which you wrote of intelligently, creatively and truthfully - send this to every rehab and high school! It is perfect. A WOW for me. soup mail. Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/1/2019 9:27:00 AM
Fatal attraction. Well done.
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Date: 7/29/2019 8:35:00 AM
Hello Cal Bambi, oh-h-h-drugs. that would would be hard to kick. A person has to have a strong will power to kick that drug habit. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/28/2019 1:39:00 PM
Yes she is very seductive.
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