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The Honeyed Morning

the cups of pink wine mingling with the morning sun the bees throng the cups _____________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/20/2018 8:49:00 AM
Lovely! I got in to feeding the wasps last year, buffet outside meant they weren't trying to get inside ;)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2018 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
Date: 4/20/2018 4:35:00 AM
Breakfast on cups...Nice one...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2018 10:44:00 AM
The cups need clarification ! ... the haiku-compulsion stands in the way ! ... thank you so much ...
Date: 4/19/2018 10:25:00 PM
A great haiku, dear Probir, buzzing with vibrant and colorful imagery. Looks like sweet morning to me.. Warmest wishes, my friend. ~Susan
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2018 10:49:00 AM
I am honoured ... thank you ...

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