The Girl On The Monkey Bars

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18.41 pm October 6, 2024

Little preschool girl playing on a playground, hanging walk along the monkey bars Stock Photo | Adobe Stock

The girl on the monkey bars Looks like a boy from afar Swaying up and down Huge muscles on both arms. Trying to imitate spiderman Shifting from bar to bar to stun To show her unique kind of sport By dropping her loose shorts.

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/13/2024 11:10:00 PM

Just a Silly Little Poem 10 lines or less Contest Judged: 10/12/2024 7:43:00 PM Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley Place 1 (up to 3rd multi-w)

Miranda Hawley

Date: 10/13/2024 1:10:00 PM

Relatable because that girl on the monkey bars was me. Growing up that was my happy place on the playground. Congrats on your win in my contest.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2024 11:08:00 PM

Thank you so much for my win dear poet friend. Your acknowledgment and approval on my poem is so much appreciatede and they mean so much. Blessings to you always. Hugs