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The Girl Before Me

i can't move on if everytime i look at you i see her i can't forgive you if everytime we lay together i feel her

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/12/2024 11:58:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Darren White

Date: 3/10/2017 4:50:00 AM

That is a great first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome here :) It's sad, heartfelt and very strong too.

Luke Irwin

Date: 3/8/2017 8:41:00 PM

Short, direct and powerful

Entiele Caufield
Date: 3/10/2017 12:17:00 AM

thanks!