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The ghost of passion

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The ghost of passion swirls in my soul
      he who elicited it all from me has fled this earthly place
         his corporeal self still haunts my days and my nights
                     consoling and bringing tears a new
                           Impossible pain is grief
                       memories wrapped in longing
            sprinkled with thoughts of missed opportunities
                     and guilt from paths not chosen
                     and yet its all I have of him now

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Ink Empress Date: 12/23/2023 10:28:00 AM Sometimes as time flies and when we lose loved ones, it is the memories swirling in the midst of all that remain as the only thing we can keep close to our heart. I felt so much, reading this very poignant and touching write that depicts grief and loss in such an eloquent manner, i especially loved the lines “ memories wrapped in longing sprinkled with thoughts of missed opportunities“ your way with phrasing thoughts is so poetic. And soul stirring. Pleasure reading you. Sending you light Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/22/2023 12:11:00 PM This poignant poem captures the complex emotions surrounding the loss of a loved one and the enduring presence of their memory. The speaker's use of evocative language creates a vivid portrayal of the lingering impact of a departed soul... It beautifully captures the enduring impact of love and loss. It eloquently expresses the bittersweet nature of memories, the ache of grief, and the intricate emotions that accompany the absence of a cherished person.. Login to Reply Silent One Date: 12/22/2023 12:11:00 PM The ghost of passion becomes a haunting yet consoling presence, creating a nuanced portrayal of the complex tapestry of emotions woven by the memory of a departed loved one