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The Fervent Atheist

She left the tent in holy fervor, Hell-bent to spread the Word. The Spirit moved and made her quiver; No act of faith was too absurd. She knocked on doors, she spoke with zeal, Her faith she shared in earnest. There was no doubt God’s love is real: His justice is the sternest. I asked what other gods contend For space inside her pretty head. Might Yahweh, Allah or Shiva rend The veil between gods ‘live and dead? Do you beseech the Norse god Thor, Once favored by the common folk? The Son of Odin is heard no more. What power broke that yoke? For love there was an Aphrodite, For war the Greek god Ares. Athena’s wisdom eclipsed the mighty, As Apollo‘s virtues the Virgin Mary‘s. Though long I queried with due respect, She unyielding kept her patience. “On Jesus only I reflect; To Him I owe allegiance.” One god only fills her life - It severs her from me. I trust in reason, yet love my wife With faith in one less god than she.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/30/2019 10:02:00 AM
This brought a smile. For me a quieter faith has served me well. I have always thought it takes more faith to be an Atheist, especially when so much evidence of God’s existence surrounds us. I can however appreciate that with all the bad stuff that happens it can be hard to see God at times.
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Greg Hladky
Date: 11/30/2019 9:01:00 PM
I was pointing out to my siblings, who are all devoutly Christian, that we are all atheists about past gods. ;-)

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