The Factory

As a child I was warned
that if I looked at the light
for too long it would send
me blind and yet
the stuttering flash
and eerie blue light 
from an arc welder
that crackled deep inside
the factory would tempt me
to steal a glance into 
its bright, menacing core.

Mystery and danger lurked
in the cavernous dark that waited
beyond the door. The gray brick
building was windowless and wore
no signage. The locals simply
called it ‘the welding factory’. 
I would pass it every day
on my way to school, 
look into its depths to see
spectral figures fluoresce 
then dissipate into the dark.

Men in hinged metal face masks
and leather aprons would emerge
into daylight from out 
of the factory door to have a smoke.
They looked like visitors
from another world stepping out 
from their alien craft.
Their art was a kind of sorcery 
stolen from the sun 
or the devil.

On weekends 
I would sometimes sneak around
and find bits of bent wire
and metal tubing with black
blisters growing out of stubs.
It was treasure for a boy.
I wondered what they made there
and stayed alert in case
some creature emerged 
from out of the dark
with its red glowing eyes,
the same that sometimes 
tormented me during those long 
nights of panic and delirium
and unheard cries.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 5/12/2024 7:49:00 PM
Love the segue, Paul, as well as your vivid descriptions of arcs of light flashing... Reminiscent a bit of 'The Jungle,' by Upton Sinclair (first part of the book, anyway). ~ Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/13/2024 6:25:00 AM
So pleased to receive your kind and thouhtful words Gershon...sincerely valued. You have set me off to do some research on Upton Sinclair's, 'The Jungle'....always like to explore connections. Take care, Paul
Date: 5/11/2024 2:44:00 PM
Paul, you have a great talent for being able to write details into your verses that present more than just imagery to your readers. You've given such Indepth descriptions of this factory that I could see myself peering inside its windows with you to see what might appear to be aliens constructing who knows what... weapons to destroy the human race? Scenes like these often are the impetus for nightmares, and not just for children. I had one last night after watching a bit of the movie, 'Evil.'
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/13/2024 6:10:00 AM
Childhood creates such strong imagery at times, carrying all the weight and intensity of feeling and emotional power...still vivid and alive. Your comments, as always, are a source of strength...a trustworthy and kindly 'pick me up' when needed. Value the experience and insight that informs your words my dear friend.
Date: 5/11/2024 1:23:00 PM
As seen through a child’s eyes Paul, you bring back my own memories of welders mending gates on our street, and of course I stared straight into the flash knowing well I’d been warned not to, but all that aside this is a beautifully crafted and powerful poem, one many readers will relate to, and enjoy reading just as I have, super! cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/13/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thankyou David for your thoughtful comments and reflections. Childhood is a rich repository of material for poetry, the stuff of soul formation. Honored to receive such postive feedback my friend, expands the confidence in sending out ones little creations into the wide world. Take care, Paul
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