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The Factory

As a child I was warned that if I looked at the light for too long it would send me blind and yet the stuttering flash and eerie blue light from an arc welder that crackled deep inside the factory would tempt me to steal a glance into its bright, menacing core. Mystery and danger lurked in the cavernous dark that waited beyond the door. The gray brick building was windowless and wore no signage. The locals simply called it ‘the welding factory’. I would pass it every day on my way to school, look into its depths to see spectral figures fluoresce then dissipate into the dark. Men in hinged metal face masks and leather aprons would emerge into daylight from out of the factory door to have a smoke. They looked like visitors from another world stepping out from their alien craft. Their art was a kind of sorcery stolen from the sun or the devil. On weekends I would sometimes sneak around and find bits of bent wire and metal tubing with black blisters growing out of stubs. It was treasure for a boy. I wondered what they made there and stayed alert in case some creature emerged from out of the dark with its red glowing eyes, the same that sometimes tormented me during those long nights of panic and delirium and unheard cries.

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Date: 5/12/2024 7:49:00 PM
Love the segue, Paul, as well as your vivid descriptions of arcs of light flashing... Reminiscent a bit of 'The Jungle,' by Upton Sinclair (first part of the book, anyway). ~ Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/13/2024 6:25:00 AM
So pleased to receive your kind and thouhtful words Gershon...sincerely valued. You have set me off to do some research on Upton Sinclair's, 'The Jungle'....always like to explore connections. Take care, Paul
Date: 5/11/2024 2:44:00 PM
Paul, you have a great talent for being able to write details into your verses that present more than just imagery to your readers. You've given such Indepth descriptions of this factory that I could see myself peering inside its windows with you to see what might appear to be aliens constructing who knows what... weapons to destroy the human race? Scenes like these often are the impetus for nightmares, and not just for children. I had one last night after watching a bit of the movie, 'Evil.'
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/13/2024 6:10:00 AM
Childhood creates such strong imagery at times, carrying all the weight and intensity of feeling and emotional power...still vivid and alive. Your comments, as always, are a source of strength...a trustworthy and kindly 'pick me up' when needed. Value the experience and insight that informs your words my dear friend.
Date: 5/11/2024 1:23:00 PM
As seen through a child’s eyes Paul, you bring back my own memories of welders mending gates on our street, and of course I stared straight into the flash knowing well I’d been warned not to, but all that aside this is a beautifully crafted and powerful poem, one many readers will relate to, and enjoy reading just as I have, super! cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/13/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thankyou David for your thoughtful comments and reflections. Childhood is a rich repository of material for poetry, the stuff of soul formation. Honored to receive such postive feedback my friend, expands the confidence in sending out ones little creations into the wide world. Take care, Paul
Date: 5/11/2024 2:38:00 AM
This is heart wrenching to read two sides of the story of a boy. I like that there is that part that is exploration and wonder and it is so evident that has remained too through your wonderfully immersive story telling. A beautiful soul comes through poem after poem though Paul, of a man and poet of which I'm very fond of x
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Date: 5/13/2024 5:37:00 AM
Deeply moved by your comments DD. To receive such an endorsement of my poetry is humbling and very much appreciated. To know that the voice comes through and communicates something worthwhile gives me great pleasure...reassures me the poetry does matter. Treasure your support and kindness my dear friend.

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