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The Eye of the Storm

Darkened spiral of impending doom Hovering over the tortured ocean Thrashing in a state of gloom But there's some calm within the motion Nestled deep within its womb A well formed eye, where life is still Easing chaos, bringing peace Shielding those that had their fill But just as soon as wind gusts cease The storm returns: intent to kill Palm trees snap, tornadoes spawn Entire neighborhoods destroyed Everything familiar: gone Replaced by nothing, just a void Until we face the rising dawn The morning after: quiet yet A gentle breeze, just like the eye Except there is no looming threat A flooded world beneath the sky That will rebuild, but not forget September 8, 2021 Quintain (Sicilian) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 1/4/2022 4:45:00 PM
Loved reading your poem. Congrats!
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Avery Won
Date: 1/6/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/2/2022 3:15:00 AM
This is a great Quintain Avery. I love it. Great atmosphere created, cadence and worthy of repeated reads. Mother Nature isn't all life giving and nurturing. Cheers - Gary
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Avery Won
Date: 1/2/2022 5:06:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/2/2022 2:37:00 AM
"A gentle breeze, just like the eye Except there is no looming threat" - Great! Congratulations!
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Avery Won
Date: 1/2/2022 5:05:00 PM
Thank you :)

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