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The Drive

We cut the miles Like a blade-bent On homicide. As the tar serpent Rises readying its hood In heated passion Sashaying in its midday heat Playing water mirages Of dark shimmers As we sink in its glistening Endless asphalt river While the waft of heated rubber Rises and rises... Until we are no more No longer living In the everyday regulated regular miles. We are stars As this rocket-ship transverses Potholes of ash to a distant far

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Date: 9/26/2017 12:56:00 PM
I drive 65000 - 70000 kms a year and I hate long journeys lol Good to see a familiar pen is loosing it's ink Maragu
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Date: 4/16/2018 3:23:00 AM
Losing ink is right. Been barely in
Date: 9/26/2017 11:07:00 AM
Well written my brother.. Nice to see you writing..
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Date: 7/13/2024 12:48:00 AM
Thanks SO

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