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The Demon

His shadow moves in corners dark His calling card, a well-known mark. A trail of death, despair and want. His arrogance, a daily taunt. A hairline opening he found. Slithering through without a sound. Now the demon walks the earth. Giving misery new birth. Beware the place where darkness lives. He seeks new life to join with his.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 2:07:00 PM
Hi Kim, Thank you very much. I do love spooky! LOL ...Samia
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:54:00 PM
Samia, congrats on your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest. Great rhyming and flow. A spooky write. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:46:00 AM
Hi Carol, Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment ...Samia
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:26:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Samia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2012 5:32:00 AM
Hi kash poet, Thank you very much. I'm so glad you liked it!
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Date: 4/8/2012 5:30:00 AM
Hey Rockman, Thank you very much. I did feel limited on this one because of the line restrictions. I hope you finish some of those poems. I know it has to come naturally. Your poetry of fantastic! Thank you for commenting on mine. :)
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Date: 4/8/2012 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations Samia on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:57:00 PM
Be afraid. Be very,very afraid. But seriously, this was pretty good. I think you could have done a lot more with it though. I can't tell you how many poems I have in numerous notebooks laying at my feet waiting to be finished. One day, maybe someday, they will come to light. Keep up the good work. Rockman
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Date: 4/5/2012 12:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Bob. I really appreciate that, especially coming from someone who writes such beautiful poetry! :)
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:42:00 AM
Hi Sashi, I hope that means you like it! LOL
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:35:00 AM
wow !!!!!!!
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