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The Day I Found You

The Day I Found You The day I found you is the day my life became real, you complete me, where our hearts empaled it's every midnights vale of glow, that shines your soul, leading to mine, Your exquisite eye, gleams in twinkled star, that fills the sky, as you look at me, with a ginle, smile amongst your face, that lights the world, and our kisses now so warm, touching lips, smooths my pride, to hyperventilate, deeply in love, for you I am, forever ADDICTED....

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Date: 1/22/2013 9:25:00 PM
Oh,addicted to love....Just let it shine. :o)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 2/8/2013 10:33:00 PM
Most certainly am, will shine bright all smiles Dan :):)
Date: 1/21/2013 7:14:00 AM
wow what an addiction Carma, this is so inspiring...just love it...
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 1/21/2013 8:30:00 PM
Hi Harry Thank You, the addiction is all mine, lol glad you love it!!! All my love Carma
Date: 1/20/2013 1:28:00 PM
very nice write ;}
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 1/21/2013 8:28:00 PM
Thank You Debbie
Date: 1/20/2013 7:25:00 AM
- Good written Carma, sweet and lovely. - - Have a fine Sunday .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 1/21/2013 8:27:00 PM
Thank You my sweet Anna-Lise same to you xoxo
Date: 1/16/2013 9:18:00 PM
This is a tender and brilliant write. I loved the flow of the poem and it speaks of the heart from the heart! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 1/21/2013 8:26:00 PM
Thank You Russell, heart to heart

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