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I made it into a song. Its pretty special. Music and performance by Suno. (C)  

Lyrics by Susan Manley (C) 

 

 

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I did not believe in love at first sight its illogical at best but faced with how I felt that day and your memories now to overlay It's clear that love at first sight has stood the test I saw you in a flash and knew I needed to meet you So compelled I walked out of a castle across a brick cobbled road and I put on my best public face to impress and I introduced myself in the most respectable way And we then each knew the others names and only recently you filled me in, you were aware of me too and felt the same That first time we laughed together is when I consciously knew I loved you The pull was not just crazy lust And then at the photo shoot when I touched you and kissed your face so electric I just about bust And as you faced me and then we kissed on the lips for the very first time an electric jolt that became molten in place and for a split second I was yours and you were mine And we both remember it all like it was yesterday which is impossible but true a shared memory I went looking for answers because its over the top We are one soul spread in two bodies They call it twin flame and I repeat I have never felt so complete as when I am with you and at peace it's everything and sublime It just about stops time And I am just so damn glad you are mine, and I am yours That first time we laughed together is when I consciously knew I loved you The pull was not just crazy lust And then at the photo shoot when I touched you and kissed your face so electric I just about bust And as you faced me and then we kissed on the lips for the very first time an electric jolt that became molten in place and for a split second I was yours and you were mine The dance of falling in love, to Alan a country song Artimus (C) Susan Manley 06/24/2024

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