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Quatern
A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two third line of stanza three and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)

I question the concept of God to a people that worship war. There’s no food to feed the hungry, but plenty of guns to kill them. After seeing hate run rampant, I question the concept of God. He supposedly loves us all, yet sends souls to hell forever. History’s hosted many Gods, we hold to ridicule today. I question the concept of God, why’s there so many to chose from? I don’t discriminate ‘twist Gods or those that believe in their faith. In this technological world, I question the concept of God. (Quatern) 11-16-2020 It's a part of me - Life and the perceptions and philosophies you hold Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 12/24/2020 10:24:00 PM
God is just not a mere concept it's a belief.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/25/2020 7:30:00 AM
Curie, thanks for your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/18/2020 3:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/18/2020 4:39:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise , I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/17/2020 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/17/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

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