The Children Of Deprivation Premiere Contest Winner


In the terrane of deplorable deprivation manifested 
in the wasteland of wretched desertion,
the obscure tufts of the subdued slender grass 
struggle to rise through the cleavage of stony destiny.
The frail faces shaping the artifacts of spiteful fate, 
flicker with the fading smile of residual innocence,
borrowed from the remnant rays of the forsaken sun, 
already sunk in the depth of desolate dark horizon.

The children when they should be blooming like flowers,  
stray to nowhere, uncared and soiled
in the harsh squall of the juvenile servile servitude. 
Under the fair freedom spread by the unbound sky 
the infantile dewdrops devoid of pristine patina
no longer bejewel the puerile grass of our meadow.
Tarnished by the muck of our malevolent times,
the deranged dreams of the dew dry premature.

In the twilight hour on the penultimate journey,
I wish I could give the last rays of my setting sun
to the relics of the dewdrops so they can glow awhile. 
I wish I could drip the last drop of empathy from my oasis,
so their innocent smile doesn’t desiccate in inimical desert.
Just one thing I’d like to change is to stop child labor, 
show the children of the lesser God 
the dreams of dew that would never die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 3/10/2024 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserved win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard
Date: 3/9/2024 9:40:00 AM
Your words are so deep they touch the heart in a very special way, and make one feel the sadness and the unfairness of it all, congrats on your fist place win dear poet a job well done. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:54:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and for encouraging me with your nice comments.
Date: 3/8/2024 9:35:00 AM
"The children when they should be blooming like flowers, stray to nowhere, uncared and soiled in the harsh squall of the juvenile servile servitude" brings tears to my eyes, Subimal. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Enjoy it:)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:53:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and nice commengt.
Date: 3/8/2024 6:34:00 AM
Congrats on first place win! This poem gave me goosebumps due to the subject matter, which is close to my heart. Add to that, it was extremely well-written. Awesome
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:51:00 PM
Belated thank you the placement and for your encouraging comment.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/10/2024 12:46:00 PM
Um, hello?
Date: 3/3/2024 5:12:00 AM
Dear Subimal, your poem echoes the profound sorrow and longing for change in a world plagued by neglect and suffering. Your words paint an insightful picture of innocence tarnished by harsh realities. The imagery of struggling grass and fading sunbeams speaks volumes about the resilience and fragility of childhood. Your beautiful wish to halt child labor and ignite dreams is a beacon of hope amidst despair. Thank you for giving voice to the voiceless and shedding light on a plight often overlooked. - Blessings, Daniel
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/6/2024 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel for your visit and for pertinent comments on the topic that us so distressing.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/6/2024 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel for your visit and for pertinent comments on the topic that us so distressing.
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