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The Breakwater

Large boulders piled high stretch out into the bay and form a breakwater that shields the beach from high waves and heavy swells rolling in from southerly gales. I have stood there at the end when the sea was hurling its rage and all fury exploded like bomb bursts of watery shrapnel into the air. I have seen such power subside and tamed to compliant licks around the feet of rocks. More than forty years ago on a deep breath I snorkeled down its ledges into the rock strewn and weedy world that lay at its base, places where stingrays slept and where fish glided effortlessly along crevices and over sponge covered outcrops. I cradled a fragile seahorse in my trembling hands. I no longer have the confidence to rock hop its length to the end but stand where it butts the land, commanding memory to whip up a wind and set wave upon wave to awaken a soul from its sleep and make it feel the sting of a southerly gale, wet, cold and wonderful, once again.

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Date: 6/25/2024 4:24:00 PM
Ah! What wonderful memories your writing evokes, Paul. Your memories are as vivid as if you experienced them yesterday. Bravo! :) Forget Mi-Nott
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/26/2024 3:58:00 PM
Thankfully my memory still works...it is a great storehouse to raid when in need of inspiration. Many thanks for reading the poem and offering your kind words dear Gershon.
Date: 6/25/2024 11:56:00 AM
Paul l wish l had your ability of being able of to take the reader on such wonderful journeys allowing us to see and feel it like we are there. I enjoy “our” hehe trips down memory lane especially your happy childhood memories! Love this poem my friend! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/26/2024 3:56:00 PM
As often stated....you are a treasured guest on all of my little escapades into memory and into the world of my imagination. Thankyou for your kind and supportive comments dear Deb.
Date: 6/25/2024 5:44:00 AM
You share so many of your wonderful memories with us, Paul. I look forward to reading all of them as a gift you offer fellow poets.
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/26/2024 3:53:00 PM
So kind my dear Lin....at my age memories are the most profitable source of poetic material...I am just so glad that a few of them make interesting reading and attract such gracious comments...thankyou do much my friend.
Date: 6/25/2024 4:57:00 AM
Wonderfully done Paul, we all have spots like that which whisper to us....and if we have gained any wisdom from the years we whisper back..."what was I thinking"
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/26/2024 3:49:00 PM
Thanks John...always appreciate your wise and witty observations...a trea very much valued.

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