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The Bitter Fruit: a Poem of Regret and Loss

Oh, how my heart weighs heavy with remorse For making a once sweet fruit, so bitter, so coarse She had lovely nature and endless in heart But I, a black hole, took all From the start my darkness consumed her light, Like yang to the yin I took and I took, like a wicked crook and without a second look, Left once I had my fill Gone! In search of a new thrill I watched her beauty rot to ugliness, Like a dying daffodil A monster she's become, twisted with hate Driven to anger by love, she’s gone forever It’s far too late I mourn what I've done, my heart full of regret I have an unpayable debt, for a sweet soul now ruined Oh, how I long to turn back the hands of time To clean up my mess and make amends, But it's too late, the damage is done, and she's gone A monster now, a victim of my selfish con Oh, sweet friend, I apologise for all that I’ve done For turning your light into darkness, For setting your sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/23/2023 9:32:00 AM
Very grand writing. Congratulations!
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David Chen
Date: 3/24/2023 12:36:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj Alex! I appreciate it.
Date: 2/21/2023 10:50:00 PM
Very interesting poem, if this is breakup related then usually time does heal. She'll be a poem and hopefully you'll be an anecdote.
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Date: 2/22/2023 1:01:00 AM
Thank you Dilly Dally! It was indeed breakup related, and I hope you're right.

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