The Barbie Breakdown

The older sister didn’t like the younger 
always treating her bad
when the younger was first born 
it really drove her mad
when they were children 
the older lost her sister friends 
bullied and treated her rough 
and she did it to no end

growing up the older a barbie girl 
she always got the men 
the younger second in the world
time and time again

the older one still nasty cruel 
had always been the way
never thought her sibling tool
would better her one day
but the younger sister was no tool
she was sweet and beautiful 
had a group of friends from school 
whilst the older had none at all
but men all chased her 
she could pick and choose
never treated the younger better
as the younger would always lose 

Having lost the younger friends 
The older went for it again 
fancied her sisters sexy friend 
and she always gets the men 
but this WAS her sisters friend 
a friend immune to the trend
and he knew of her nasty past
didn’t like how she treated 
finally the older was past up at last 
for the first time ever defeated 

if you bully his friend 
he’ll never get with you
and he gave his friend 
the victory she never knew

The older sister had a nervous breakdown
and the friend has been kicked out now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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