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The Ancient Bitch of Days, For Chad Bittner Hurt

It stood a while, alone, the perfect phrase Entire and beautiful upon the stage As lovely as two words could ever be ‘Till came the muse, the ancient ***** of days Demanding blood and ink upon the page Insisting passion and complexity And sacrifice, and violent hymns of praise Her hunger and her ardour to assuage In wild defiance of simplicity The poet quaked in terror, and betrayed His words to slake her raw and awesome rage In her cold hands they cried for company © Gail Foster 13th December 2016

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Date: 1/22/2017 12:58:00 PM
This is truly one magnificent poem! I am floored by just how fine a poem this is! Immediate fav and A10!
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Date: 1/13/2017 1:47:00 AM
My admiration for your work is great but a little above my plebian intellect. Is Chad Bittner Hurt a person? If you were a premium member then you could elaborate a bit and even do your biography. Sorry but I am slightly addicted to your work and I want to know more
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/22/2017 12:56:00 PM
Her work, I am a big fan of but my memory problems(early stage of Alzheimers) keeps me from viewing often, it due to my forgetting.
Date: 12/14/2016 10:01:00 AM
At times I wish my muse were more aggressive. Love the write, Gail:)
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Gail Foster
Date: 12/14/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Daniel. The muse takes different forms for me at different times... All the best to you
Date: 12/14/2016 7:20:00 AM
What do you feed that muse of yours, lol, nicely done.
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Gail Foster
Date: 12/14/2016 8:13:00 AM
She feasts on the ashes of roses, ha ha. Thank you for reading...

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