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The Act of Sympathy

My arm extends around her shoulder, for she is lost in lonely memories. Carrying a burden like a prodigious boulder, I give her my absolute paramount sympathies. I only wish for her exorbitant anguish to cease. Encompassed in my love she shall prevail in this battle she calls her perpetual foe. She’s been drowning and feels to no avail will she find liberty from suffering’s woe. Oh, my warming arms wish to never let go. I squeeze so tight, for we fit just right like a puzzle with perfect pieces glued. My touch may help her never lose joy's sight, and help her find victory in pain’s feud. My kind and amiable hands pray she’s renewed. This loving act of sympathy will give her peace, and show her my understanding commiseration. Her joy contingent upon her sorrow’s decrease, may I envelope her in a benevolent sensation- and bestow comfort onto her intense devastation. Write Me an Emotion-act Brenda Chiri September 7, 2018

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Date: 10/9/2018 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win with a beautiful verse.
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Date: 9/17/2018 7:22:00 AM
Wonderful. Your words are a warm embrace to the reader. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/9/2018 8:33:00 PM
Beautiful empathic poem. Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/9/2018 2:42:00 PM
I can feel the warmth of your hug through this beautiful poem, Laura. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/7/2018 2:13:00 PM
For you to have thoughts like that speaks to the kind of person you must be!
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Date: 9/8/2018 7:12:00 AM
why are you always so sweet to me? Thank you sweet Sunlite..be blessed :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/8/2018 7:12:00 AM
why are you always so sweet to me? Thank you sweet Sunlite..be blessed :)-luloo

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