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The Abyss of Void

The seamless sky called life glowed with cloudless beauty, on the rippling breeze flitted a butterfly free, on its wings I painted lattice of my being. Flowers of my meadow bloomed all seasons for me. The dawning horizon splashed the spectrum of bliss, on unfurled buds of dream I was on course to fly. Euphoria took me to realm of fantasy, I didn’t see storm clouds gather at the edge of sky. Splintered in the flickering vive of tinged twilight, in the vortex of spasm I saw my sky decay, and crumbling with my dreams in the abyss of void. In its dark depth I found the end of my pathway. The flushing meadow turned to withering debris, the destemmed flowers didn’t see new sunrise in spring. Surge of summer rains carried away the petals, the butterfly lost colors from its broken wings.
September 27, 2020 Syllable count : 12 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Writing Challenge-Decay Sponsor : Constance La France

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Date: 10/14/2020 2:47:00 PM
You've painted a perfect portrait with your words. My favorite part of this poem is "Euphoria took me to realm of fantasy". Saved to read again. Have a wonderful day :) ~Angie
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Date: 9/30/2020 5:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... a beautiful writing, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2020 9:27:00 PM
Lovely canvas you've written, Subimal , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/29/2020 6:52:00 PM
Beautiful poem Subimal...Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/29/2020 3:55:00 PM
Hi Subimal. An utterly delightful poem.! Your creations are always so magnificent!! Topic covered with colour, flair, emotion. Massive Congratulations on your Number One Win!! All readers are in awe of your talent.
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Date: 9/29/2020 1:47:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 9/29/2020 11:04:00 AM
I love the last line. Nice writing - congratulations on the win! Linda
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