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The Absence of Presence

Four wheel room, ulter silence My mind looking,for repentance These thoughts, filled with hidrance Hence over shadowed by nonsense I have lost dreams in abundance And wonder about my existence And all I ask is a chance To stop these dreams of penance I dream, a dead bird at first glance And i watch it, fall in a religious trance And started with death a wierd type of romance Or was it a game? A game of chance These two fought with remarkable endurance And the birds soul, started to fade a way in distance And the body stayed there, as it decays in essence And that's when it happened, the absence of presence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2016 12:59:00 AM
SERGE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:05:00 AM
Serge Comeau, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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Date: 11/1/2011 6:03:00 AM
Tis the first of November and the day is starting out beautiful. The poetry I am reading this morning is very diverse and should make my whole day enjoyable as I read it. Your hearts are overflowing onto your paper and makes such amazing reading. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Serge. Love, Carol
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