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(a poem in Senryus) They say that you should never follow whisky with beer - but my new rhyme is - never follow several martinis with two more martinis Ladies, please take my advice, you can’t focus your eyes in the morning When your roommates rude little sister runs the loud vacuum around noon Who gets up before noon in the summer? It’s not right, if you ask me. “Mom told me too?” That’s an excuse reminiscent of old Nuremberg I have feels for her as encumbered as she is by parental yoke. . . A song for this (please play it low): Hangovers with You by Big B & Dirty Heads Rock

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