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That Moment In Time

Don’t you just love it, that moment in time When you have been lacking a half decent rhyme When sentences started do not feed the next When what your next verse is is leaving you vexed When that first line reads like a Shakespeare or Byron But every line two, trips a ‘Bad Gramma’ siren When that one idea that was smart or ironic Turns out to be, at its best… embryonic When nothing else gels in that dark empty space That lingers above and behind a blank face The grey matter there that is tired and stressed Has let you down badly… by doing its best When all of this and much more is the truth Suddenly you could go dance on the roof You dare not presume that you’ve pulled back that hood But penning one poem feels so Goddammed good.

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Date: 10/27/2024 9:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun Rhyme write. Each one writes different. Some words show up fast, some want to sit/play with us. Have a great day writing away.....................
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/28/2024 7:15:00 AM
I can go from a dozen ideas to zilch in the blink of an eye, Paula. I recently had an idea for ‘He’s wearing Brylcreem’ to the tune of ‘He who would valiant be’… ie the line that goes ‘To be a pilgrim’. Try as I might it, it just wouldn’t gel (?). Another unfinished ditty in my slush pile ;-)
Date: 10/26/2024 3:36:00 PM
When that happens, put down the pen or walk away from the keyboard. And then think, 'hmmm, maybe I'll try some free verse.' You had no trouble making your point evident in this rhymer.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2024 6:10:00 PM
Ok you can blame me. ;-)
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/26/2024 4:21:00 PM
I can’t see me ever writing free verse, I don’t really get it… sometimes I like it (that’s often your fault) but I take much enjoyment from finding ‘that’ rhyme (I was rather chuffed with ironic and embryonic). As a fallen star ;-) it’s kinda who I is! Keep twinkling, Lin. Terry

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