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That gaze, a silent meeting, the beginning of everything that could be

That gaze, a silent meeting, the beginning of everything that could be, Like two worlds touching at the edge of a dream, I felt a shiver, An unseen connection, like a thin silver thread linking the stars. His eyes, a window to an unknown universe, drew me in, As if wanting to tell me untold stories, In a language only hearts understand, without words, And in that silence, I felt reality melting away. Each second seemed to flow like a lazy river of memories, Wrapping emotions and desires into a single intense moment, A beginning of everything, like the first ray of sun breaking the night, His gaze, a promise of all the things that might be. And deep in my soul, I felt that everything begins now, Like a story written on a parchment of stars, untouched by time, A beginning singing melancholically about the magic of a gaze, Opening the gates to an infinity of possibilities. In that moment, I knew I had stepped onto a new path, That gaze, the beginning of all waiting to be discovered, Like an old song echoing once more in the heart, A journey just beginning, with a single look.

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Date: 1/1/2025 5:35:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Dan Enache
Date: 1/1/2025 4:12:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 12/27/2024 12:18:00 AM
Dan, I really like this poem, "His gaze, a promise of all things that might be".. lovely phrases in this poem. Well composed.
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Dan Enache
Date: 1/1/2025 4:13:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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