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For those who haven't seen the movie, Clarence was the angel who saved George Bailey.

My shaking hand ~ Inside my pants pocket Warmed it be ~ When I pulled out my locket Zuzu's baby picture ~ My dear treasured keep Always with me ~ By my bed when I sleep Her face so meek ~ So small and so squib As she sleeps silent ~ Alone in her crib I thought that I lost her ~ When she fell ill Pneumonia's burden ~ A baby's...sure fire kill Her temperature high ~ One hundred five She should have passed ~ Somehow, she's alive An haloed angel ~ Came to me that night He answered my prayers ~ Gave Zuzu...new light Ever since then, I've prayed ~ Along with my wife Clarence, thank you ~ It's a wonderful life 12-13-2018 Movie Magic Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory R. Barden It's a wonderful life- George Bailey

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Date: 3/24/2019 11:07:00 AM
Back with congrats! :)
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Date: 3/21/2019 10:14:00 AM
That is such a wonderful movie, I watch it every year around Christmas. So much happened in that movie I thought you condensed it so well. Congratulations on your win Charles! : )
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:52:00 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:22:00 AM
Now my dear friend, this truly is an exquisite piece! I have always since first seeing that great movie loved it! As it represents the beauty, wonder and great blessing that, LIFE TRULY IS! A fav and this is a shining gem that inspires so..
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Date: 12/14/2018 6:36:00 AM
Oh that movie never gets old; it retains it's magic, every year. Lovely poem.
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Date: 12/14/2018 1:15:00 AM
I have seen the movie long ago, nice poem! :)
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Date: 12/13/2018 7:52:00 PM
Nicely done, Charles. It is so hard to see a child sick ..the worry and suffering when you go through that, it's heart wrenching... Good luck in the contest.
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/13/2018 8:00:00 PM
Yes, you are right, Eve, Heart wrenching for sure. Thank you :)
Date: 12/13/2018 9:58:00 AM
Oh, Charles, this is beautiful. I haven't watched the movie, but this is wonderful. Best of luck!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/13/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kaveesha!
Date: 12/13/2018 7:55:00 AM
Charles, oh so beautiful. I watch that movie each year and never get tired of it, I love that character Clarence, he is so delightful and the movie teaches us a great lesson. Well, this is a winner for me!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/13/2018 7:59:00 PM
I myself have watched this movie dozens of times, such a great movie..never gets old. Thank you so much Dear Heart for your ever always kind and thoughtful words!
Date: 12/13/2018 5:49:00 AM
It is a wonderful life! So wonderful! Good luck in the contest; I feel like this is a winner!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/13/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! Greg's contests are always a challenge...and tough to win. But I do thank you kindly :)

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