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tentative steps into the known

an inexplicable lure of cold drawn into treacherous footing a spark of recognition on that sharp inhalation of ice-ridden air the womb forgotten though it enabled recovery for this readiness it begins on first breath so frightening until exhalation then warmth mingles with the universe creating awareness of presence eyes open viewing frozen crystals on spiderwebs shimmering paths careful step after careful step forever conscious ~ our feet may fail us stark barren trees tell a tale momentarily stopping us in our tracks as life is framed in the in-between spaces of twilight lit branches a structure towering above anchored by it's whole self reflected beneath ponds are sealed shut from prying eyes have faith, life goes on out of sight our palms may reveal a window when we lay belly down maybe catch a snowflake an indecipherable message react on instinct as it teases the back of your mind take your body heat insulate it explore reminiscence/preparation both/none ~ maybe stepping outside eyes half closed perhaps to break the dream always to break the dream chances come and go heat sources matter don't stray far though each winter etches on the soul

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Date: 11/29/2023 2:38:00 PM
A beautiful Winter Sonata D. Your words are a testament to the glory of the season. SV
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Date: 11/29/2023 2:44:00 PM
Thank you SV - it was a challenge writing something for this one. I enjoyed it though x
Date: 11/29/2023 12:05:00 PM
This was do very interesting. I felt a happiness of winter. As well as foreboding. Enjoyable.
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Date: 11/29/2023 2:44:00 PM
There's definitely a bit of both in there, thank you for your comment x
Date: 11/29/2023 4:01:00 AM
Where did this one come from.....brilliant !. Could spend an evening exploring the content and even then there are so many side exits thst delight the mind. This is a poem you just dive into and take in....well done DD
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Date: 11/29/2023 2:50:00 PM
Hurray! Thank you Paul - I did hold onto to this for a whole 4 days before posting it to let it settle a bit. I appreciate you enthusiastic comment, thank you
Date: 11/28/2023 7:12:00 PM
Well worth the wait on this one, the reader can own these thoughts! Multiple reads to savor...
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Date: 11/29/2023 2:51:00 PM
Many thanks Craig :)
Date: 11/28/2023 1:14:00 PM
What a creative write/story. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 11/28/2023 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Paula, appreciated
Date: 11/28/2023 12:31:00 PM
warmth mingles with the universe, in between spaces, some cracking lines among many, I like that you said known instead of unknown D
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Date: 11/28/2023 3:04:00 PM
Ahh knowing... A strange sensation that can't be explained :)

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