Temporary Relief

mosquitos buzzing flee the smoking barbeque return tomorrow written May 17, 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/18/2021 8:59:00 PM

Solution -- Keep the fire burning, I guess. Nicely imaged, methinks. :) gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/18/2021 9:55:00 PM

As good a solution as any, G.W.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/18/2021 8:16:00 AM

They're certainly annoying little creatures Milton, Bbq smoke and citronella will send them packing. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/18/2021 9:04:00 AM

Yep, I try everything here in the summertime, Tom.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/18/2021 2:51:00 AM

Those pesky mosquitos, nice haiku though, Milton:)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/18/2021 9:03:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Jo.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/18/2021 12:07:00 AM

I would like to see you expand this haiku into a haibun. I know you would do it well.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/18/2021 9:03:00 AM

Thanks for your confidence, Caren. I'll give it a try.