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In an effort to increase my vocaabulary, I have extracted poetic words from Sotto poet's poem,"Purple dreams in other realms". These words are carefully used in the present poem. Thanks Sotto.

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In the halcyon hush of twilight meadows, a clown carves laughter from hydrangea elixir, his smile — a fuchsia epitaph, hidden behind a dazzling white glow. Sparkling countless orbs drift from his broken pockets, ghosts grow wishes in splotchy shade, each sangria song he sings splinters against the opalescent primrose sky. Serendipitously, sorrow stitches his grin — a mystical black ballet performed for an audience of lustrous fireflies. Coral summer nights smell wonderful to others, but he drifts alone in purple dreams, his burgundy luna heart heavy with psychedelic echoes of forgotten cheers. Spree silvery jewels tumble down his cheeks — not laughter, but the silent fabric of darkness knit with marvel, where every jest hides another tear.

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Date: 4/28/2025 4:02:00 PM
Coral summer nights. That must be a sight to see dear Jay, probably as pretty as a blue Jay in the sky
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Date: 4/28/2025 3:25:00 PM
Jay....what wonderful imagery in this lovely poem! Debx
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Date: 4/28/2025 12:11:00 PM
that is thee best sunset film (poem)...... wowza.......len
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Date: 4/28/2025 11:31:00 AM
So well-crafted poem with wonderful layers of metaphors.
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Date: 4/28/2025 11:05:00 AM
- Lovely poem :) - There's nothing wrong with your own vocabulary, Jay :) - Some poets use way too much metaphors... it often becomes difficult to understand - Write from your heart :) - hugs
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