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Take a Breath

draw in many breaths pure crisp cotton snowy air jagged peaks beckon snare young and old to challenge death defying runs of ice

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:20:00 AM

great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/10/2015 8:55:00 AM

Images coming to life because of your captivating writing, dear Kimberly!

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/10/2015 9:13:00 AM

I sincerely appreciate your stopping in to read my poems. Thank you for the special encouragement! Big hugs, Kimberly

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2015 12:19:00 AM

a challenging winter scenario and great imagery, Kimberly...I'm glad they don't beckon me! Hugs, Rhonda

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/10/2015 9:10:00 AM

Thank you for stopping in with such kind remarks, Rhonda! I was remembering my long ago days in Banff National Park :) Hugs, Kimberly

Hija De La Luna

Date: 3/9/2015 11:51:00 PM

i can sense it, Kimberly! lovely write!

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/10/2015 9:08:00 AM

Thank you for the sweet comments, Hija! Hugs, Kimberly xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/9/2015 11:42:00 PM

I can visualize the peaks and feel pure crisp cotton snowy air Kimberly . God bless>>>Rajat

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/10/2015 9:07:00 AM

I am blessed by your kindness and very appreciative of your comments, Rajat! Hugs, Kimberly xx