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Tainted Feathers

Obscure horizons, Coated seagull out at sea: Glossy...liquid death.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 5/15/2010 11:36:00 PM

I agree with linda .. something to consider?Including these that you have written as well!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/15/2010 10:31:00 PM

Great One ,i missed this one,i love the last verse....Charma

Linda Milgate

Date: 5/14/2010 7:40:00 PM

Someone suggested I make this comment to you. The haiku that has come out of your picture contest on oil spill. Have read some of the haiku all really good elicit strong respose. Why not suggest people send some of them as letters to local papers. Shouldn't be confined to these pages. Send them to Rachel Maddow? Good idea. Rips my heart.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/14/2010 3:52:00 AM

another great one!! I just hate that the ocean is going to get worse before it gets better in the gulf and possibly elsewhere, since they are not stopping the flow.