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SYMPHONY OF THE SUNRISE

Invited by the vibrant firmament for a celestial spectacle here am I yielding with exuberance ready to behold sunrise miracles yet was likewise divinely enthralled by its offered symphony … angelic orchestra renders heavenly melodies midst kaleidoscopic blends of dawn radiance as harps of praises prevail over crescendo of worship-exaltation while sun continually conquers the sky with triumphant golden blaze that heralds cheering allegro of jubilant hymns accompanying trumpets' staccato for championship march proving its assigned function by the sovereign Creator as the “greater light to rule the day”--- serenely reigning with the adagio of seraphim's harmony and cherubim's rhythmic hums soothingly sweet. Oh, here am I, captivated spiritually anticipating the coming of the “Light”* with all His glory… and yes, thankful for this poetic prompt yielding this muse. *John 8:12 Then spake Jesus again unto them, saying, I am the light of the world: he that followeth me shall not walk in darkness, but shall have the light of life. August 25, 2024 2nd place, "Moonlight or Sunrise" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Ink Empress; judged on 9/5/2024

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Date: 9/5/2024 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write. Love your ending. I say, always be thankful. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 9/5/2024 6:26:00 AM
Dear beata, i love that last line so sweet and also love the word pairing throughout this write! Sumptuous metaphors and such profound and soulfully divine imagery so well crafted throughout! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for sharing this
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Beata Agustin
Date: 9/5/2024 7:29:00 AM
Dear Ink, Wow! Thanks so much for your comments so uplifting as well as the placement. God bless you.
Date: 8/27/2024 2:09:00 AM
Nice expressions and welcome of the God's light which always show us the path of glory. With best wishes... Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 8/25/2024 5:27:00 PM
Beata, so lovely, so wonderful! … anticipating the coming of the “Light” with all His glory… Amen!
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Date: 8/25/2024 6:18:00 AM
Beata, your poem is vividly descriptive and so inspiring. Janice
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Date: 8/25/2024 1:31:00 AM
Brilliant as the sun. Love this. God bless you friend. Much love, Gina
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