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Sweet Heartache

Aching as the dim light awakens me. If only hearts were larger than the mind. Bleeding for what will never be. At days end, wrenched to pieces that are key To having sweet release from what I find. Aching as the dim light awakens me. Stained, my love unfit with appetency; Seeking sweet release; faltered faith in mind. Bleeding for what will never be. Dancing in the fire of illicit plea; willfully chastised for pretending blind. Aching as the dim light awakens me. Bound by chafing chains, perpetually; Suffering, by my hand, for that which binds. Bleeding for what will never be. Beating through the ache, marked to set me free; Quelled by unwholesome thoughts and intertwined. Aching as the dim light awakens me. Torturing every fiber of my being; Stabbing with ferocity redesigned. Bleeding for what will never be. Faint, and dying still, mind and heart agree; Forever bound within these chains I’ll be. Aching as the dim light awakens me. Bleeding for what will never be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2009 5:24:00 AM
Nice work, I enjoyed reading, Hopefully this suffering is not eternal.
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:35:00 PM
Jennifer, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:17:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:58:00 PM
Congrats!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Jennifer. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jennifer. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 9:40:00 AM
Congrats Jennifer on your villanelle "Sweet Heartache" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:31:00 PM
Sad but very beautiful and inspiring poetry. Congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 2:10:00 PM
sad with a lot of feeling and a beautiful write.
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:16:00 AM
Jennifer - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/27/2009 5:50:00 AM
i really like this poem an awful lot...very well written piece!...Luke
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