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Sweet Bleeding

In a Texas commercial circus the journey is set vehicled by hormonal energy beginning from the cashier's tag well placed on her blue shirt exactly on her very firm left Breast with the name "Carmen" The route of desires his wants drive through having a static attention on her mammary glands but the Life in him, already as far as Bremen. Engineered by libido so troublesome which takes it guns, even in no provocation. Just usual bare skin stimulates the production of his semen and simple feminine curves blacken his mind with bitumen as part of him slides down the huge lumen of intense sexual intentions. He places the General's rank on his 'small head' then the big one becomes void of all acumen. Eyes fixed, body static, lips separated all these, irritating the nearby women as this middle-aged being drops to the lowest point of all men. Planning on a tour below her abdomen his road trip revolve round her hymen a well covered pretty damsel yet he sees as flesh full of foramens in a place far from a serenity of physical intimacy yet somehow he falls for an unforeseen trap of infernos desires. His heart, the only villain as it rejects any deal with this sudden natural cause. A flood of laughter and jeers welcome his total presence once again, he tries to wave off the premonition of a bad omen not knowing, to the corruption of his thoughts his 'third leg' all along has been saying AMEN!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/28/2014 2:30:00 AM
i love the write very much.... are you from SA?
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Patrick Nigros
Date: 9/24/2014 2:09:00 AM
Amazing, My Surname is Makama as well.....
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 7:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot Patrick. I am not from SA
Date: 7/27/2014 1:39:00 PM
Wow!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 7:56:00 AM
nice to know I am wowing someone
Date: 6/10/2014 8:37:00 AM
A most powerful write - enjoyed reading this piece. Kindest regards.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 7:55:00 AM
Thanks a lot Pandita
Date: 6/5/2014 9:39:00 AM
This is amazing poetry Funom, I don't get on soup much these days, but this is sure an welcome to my return...
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2014 9:59:00 AM
Oh harry horseman. Thanks a lot for your amazing comments
Date: 5/30/2014 9:33:00 PM
A very strong poem that took me by complete surprise , You are a very talented poet indeed,
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2014 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words

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