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Sweet and Salty

Salty water has never tasted so sweet. Tears drop down my face and into my sobbing mouth as I savour my own pain as if it were the last thing I will ever drink. At least I can feel pain. It proves that despite my fears, I am not immortal and if I do choose I may die. I’ve been told it’s wrong to think such things but if something so salty can taste so sweet then why can’t something wrong be right

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/13/2023 7:14:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/11/2023 12:16:00 PM

this is disturbing but a legitimate question, Blythe. Answer: I would suggest to try a little sugar and compare. There is nothing that compares with life, even if one is sad. Tomorrow is a new day and things will look different. That's all I got. Keep writing. Welcome to the soup:) Swim at your own risk. no lifeguard on duty:)