Swaying Sensibilities

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Swaying Sensibilities In the sultry summer nights, wistful waves weave a seductive spell, wet and wild, while whispering winds waltz with wistful wonders, writing tales of tantalizing temptations, tip-toeing towards a torrent of tormented desires. Scintillating sensations serenade the soul’s sensuous sanctuary, stirring subtle symphonies of sultry seduction, swaying sexy sensibilities. Climactic contractions culminate and course through our corporal connection, Pent-up passions pour into your pulsating pelvis, Powerful primal prowess, pervasive pain, provokes penetrating pleasures, Our hearts pounding, peak pulse pressures, panting and perspiring; covered in coveted carnal contentment. -Edward

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/3/2024 7:51:00 PM

Those ' sultry summer nights, ' can cause ' scintillating sensations ' to serenade, ' indeed ! ! Your thoughts leave me breathless. This is soft, sensual and beautiful, all at the same time. My heart is fluttering and I'm blushing. You've created such a breathtaking mood within. :)

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/4/2024 4:53:00 PM

Thank you Brandy, To know these works have stirred something scintillating inside you, brings me profound pleasure. That is the truest compliment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2024 6:48:00 AM

Well said in alliterative form, which enhances the climaic effect. Fanning myself ;)

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/3/2024 6:58:00 AM

Good Morning Kim, It pleases me greatly to know that my words stirred you so deeply. Set your passions ablaze.