Swallow An Ego
“When thoughts cease to flow ~
Where does ego go?” (by Unseeking Seeker)
Swallow an ego like sour food
When thoughts will cease to flow
It does make sense for common good
Together, dream and grow.
Bubbles of Illusion
Merge in single vision
For world’s one ambition
Let some pride sink, go
Swallow an ego
May 18,2022 8.56pm
Quietus
Created by” Unseeking Seeker,” consisting of one quatrain (syllable count 8-6-8-6 with a rhyme of abab ), one tercet (syllable count 6-6-6 with a rhyme scheme of ccc ), and one refrain with a rhyme scheme of (dd), made from a line of words from line one, how many words is your choice. The refrain is the title.
Bubble of illusion
Contest Judged: 5/20/2022 6:48:00 PM
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker
Place 2
Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2022
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