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Susana's Melody

Susana played a flaunting tune, That lingered near the haunting moon, The song was tragic, sad ,and sour, Which filled her with the darkest power, And when her song was over and done, She knew she had the best of fun, For when her mother scurried in, There was a floating violin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/8/2013 1:06:00 AM
Lovely poem!
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Date: 1/7/2013 11:51:00 AM
i like this poem. nicely done - JH
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Date: 1/6/2013 7:59:00 PM
Loved it ... Seren
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